Abelianization of a semidirect product

I agree with Ryan and Victor, except that you don't need presentations. The subgroup $[G \ltimes H,G \ltimes H]$ is generated by $[H,H] \cup [G,H] \cup [G,G]$, so you can write $$(G \ltimes H)^{ab} = (G \ltimes H) / \langle [H,H] \cup [G,H] \cup [G,G] \rangle.$$ If you apply the relators $[H,H]$, you get $G \ltimes H^{ab}$; then if you apply the relators $[G,H]$, you get $G \times (H^{ab})_G$; then finally if you apply $[G,G]$, you get $G^{ab} \times (H^{ab})_G$. You can add this as an extra half-paragraph or footnote rather than giving a citation.

I don't think that the referee has the right to demand a longer explanation than this, unless maybe you are writing a textbook.

A description of the derived subgroup of a semidirect product, from which the abelianization can be obtained, was published in:

Daciberg Lima Gonçalves, John Guaschi The lower central and derived series of the braid groups of the sphere Trans. Amer. Math. Soc. 361 (2009), 3375-3399. http://www.ams.org/journals/tran/2009-361-07/S0002-9947-09-04766-7/ (Proposition 3.3)

You may also find it in their preprint: http://arxiv.org/abs/math/0603701 (Proposition 29)

If you have the semidirect product $H\rtimes G$ then you have the next group split extension

$1\rightarrow H\rightarrow H\rtimes G\rightarrow G\rightarrow 1$,

We have the Hochschild–Serre spectral sequence where $\mathbb{Z}$ is a trivial $H\rtimes G-$module

$E^{2}_{p,q}=H_{p}(G,H_{q}(H,\mathbb{Z}))\Rightarrow H_{p+q}(H\rtimes G,\mathbb{Z})$,

Since the the map $H\rtimes G\rightarrow G$ is a split surjection, it follows that the map (edge morphism)

$H_{n}(H\rtimes G,\mathbb{Z})\rightarrow H_{n}(G,\mathbb{Z})=E^{2}_{n,0}$ is a slit surjection and thus $E^{2}_{n,0}=E^{\infty}_{n,0}$

In particular we have that the diferenttial $d:E^{2}_{2,0}\rightarrow E^{2}_{0,1}$ is zero (since $E^{2}_{2,0}=E^{\infty}_{2,0}$). Therefore $E^{2}_{0,1}=E^{\infty}_{0,1}$.

It follows that there is a exact sequence

$0\rightarrow E^{\infty}_{0,1}\rightarrow H_{1}(H\rtimes G,\mathbb{Z})\rightarrow E^{\infty}_{1,0}\rightarrow 0$

which splits, in this case we have that

$H_{1}(H\rtimes G,\mathbb{Z})=E^{\infty}_{0,1}\times E^{\infty}_{1,0}$

Note that

$H_{1}(H\rtimes G,\mathbb{Z})=(H\rtimes G)^{Ab}$

$E^{\infty}_{1,0}=G^{Ab}$

and

$E^{\infty}_{0,1}=H_{0}(G, H^{Ab})=(H^{Ab})_{G}$

From this we have the result by using spectral sequences.