Two versions from same tex file
Here's a solution using a flag. You can set the flag in the preamble, change it on the fly in the document if you wish.
With a little more work you could set the flag on the compile command line without having to edit the file.
\documentclass{article}
\usepackage{etoolbox}
\newtoggle{vtwo}
% set status globally in the preamble
\togglefalse{vtwo}
\newcommand{\secondversion}[1]{%
\iftoggle{vtwo}{%
#1
}
% else
{}
}
\begin{document}
...first simple version \secondversion{with some more comments is now
second version}....
% change status locally if you wish
\toggletrue{vtwo}
...first simple version \secondversion{with some more comments is now
second version}....
\end{document}